感情從何而起啊

前面還成，后面有點(diǎn)收不住了，瞎來(lái)...

最后的結(jié)局很好，一切因你而起，也必須終結(jié)于你。還是冗長(zhǎng)了些。

中間怎么就跑出個(gè)純愛(ài)斗士Alek？

「Well, you have to try harder. I don't think you're really trying. → Really? Well, maybe you should explain "really trying" to me. Tell me, how would you be "really trying" if you were me? But you're not me, are you? You don't have my petty concerns to clutter your life and keep you from trying. You don't have three kids to feed, or worry about the future of a 17-year-old boy who nearly got himself killed driving back from some kind of a nightclub with his 30-year-old friend sitting drunk in the seat beside him. No, these are not your concerns. I see that. But perhaps you're right. Perhaps I could be trying a little harder.」